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Chapter 6 - The Slag Plant And The Heirloom

The drive to the South Works slag plant took thirty minutes. It felt like thirty years.

I sat in the back of the armored SUV beside Luca. The convoy was five cars deep, moving like a black shadow through the abandoned industrial district on the edge of Lake Michigan.

The rain had stopped, but the fog rolling off the lake was thick, swallowing the streetlights.

I held the heavy wool coat tightly in my lap, feeling the stiff rectangle of the safe deposit key hidden inside the lining. It was the only leverage we had.

Luca hadn’t spoken since we left the estate. He sat perfectly still, his eyes fixed on the dark road ahead. He was no longer the man who had held me in the kitchen. He was a weapon, completely focused on the strike.

“Boss,” Marco’s voice crackled over the radio in the dashboard. “We’re two miles out. Drone surveillance shows three vehicles parked near the loading dock. Thermal imaging confirms six heat signatures inside the main warehouse. Two more on the roof.”

“Take out the roof first,” Luca ordered smoothly. “Silenced. I want them blind before we breach.”

“Copy that.”

I swallowed hard, my hands gripping the coat. “Luca. My dad. If they hear you coming, they might—”

“They won’t hear us,” Luca interrupted, turning his head to look at me. His voice softened, just a fraction, for my ears only. “I’m not going to let your father die, Nora. He saved my family’s reputation twenty years ago. Tonight, I pay the debt.”

The convoy cut their headlights. The SUVs rolled to a silent stop behind a massive wall of rusted shipping containers, a hundred yards from the plant.

Luca stepped out. I followed him, the cold lake wind biting through my clothes.

Marco and his men were already moving. They wore all black, carrying suppressed rifles, disappearing into the fog like ghosts.

“Stay behind me,” Luca told me, drawing his handgun. “Do not make a sound.”

We moved through the damp, overgrown weeds, pressing our backs against the rusted corrugated steel of the warehouse wall. High above us, two soft thwips echoed in the dark. The snipers on the roof were down.

Luca moved to the side door. It was heavy iron, chained from the inside.

He didn’t try to break it. He motioned to Marco, who attached a small strip of C4 to the hinges.

“Cover your ears,” Luca mouthed to me.

I clamped my hands over my ears and closed my eyes.

The breach was not a massive cinematic explosion. It was a sharp, concussive pop that shattered the hinges instantly. Luca kicked the heavy door inward, and the men flooded the building.

I stepped in behind Luca, my heart hammering against my ribs.

The inside of the plant was cavernous, smelling of oil, rust, and damp earth. A single industrial work light illuminated a concrete platform in the center of the room.

Tied to a metal chair in the center of that light was my father.

He looked terrible. His face was bruised, his clothes torn, his head slumped forward against his chest.

“Dad!” I screamed, unable to hold myself back.

My father’s head snapped up. His eyes, swollen and bloodshot, widened in absolute terror when he saw me.

“Nora! Run!” he rasped, his voice hoarse.

Before I could take another step, the shadows around the concrete platform moved.

Three men stepped out of the darkness, raising heavy assault rifles, aiming them directly at Luca and Marco.

And from behind the chair, stepping into the harsh yellow light, was Dominic.

He was older than Luca, with silver hair slicked back and a tailored suit that looked entirely out of place in the filthy warehouse. He smiled, a cold, reptilian expression.

“Luca Moretti,” Dominic said, his voice echoing off the high tin ceiling. “I didn’t think you cared enough about the hired help to risk a breach.”

“You’re trespassing in my city, Dominic,” Luca said, his gun aimed dead at Dominic’s chest. “Let the old man go.”

“I’m afraid I can’t do that,” Dominic chuckled. “Not until he tells me where the key is.”

Dominic reached into his suit jacket. My breath caught, expecting him to pull a gun.

Instead, he pulled out a small, intricately carved wooden box.

A family heirloom.

It was my mother’s jewelry box. The one she had given me before she died. The one I kept on my dresser in my small bedroom at the estate.

“My men tore your little maid’s room apart,” Dominic said, tracing the carved wood with his thumb. “They didn’t find the key. But they found this. And inside…”

He popped the lid open. He pulled out a small, folded piece of paper.

“I found a bank statement,” Dominic smiled. “From a secure vault in Geneva. In Nora’s name.”

My blood ran cold. The key in the coat was for a local deposit box where my dad hid the copies. The original ledgers, the ones that could destroy Dominic completely, were in Switzerland.

“If you kill us,” Luca said, “you’ll never get the girl to Geneva to open the box.”

“I don’t need her to open it,” Dominic said smoothly. “I just needed to know which bank it was. I have people in Geneva who can blow a vault door in three minutes. All I need now is to tie up loose ends.”

Dominic raised his hand, signaling his men to fire.

But he didn’t see what I saw.

Behind Dominic, emerging silently from the shadows near the rusted conveyor belt, was Ray.

The driver Luca had sent home sick had refused to stay behind. He had flanked the building.

Ray didn’t have a gun. He had a heavy steel wrench.

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And as Dominic dropped his hand, Ray swung the wrench with everything he had.

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